Is this a good Plot? tell the truth?

I honestly think that this is a good plot, but what would make it just a tad more interesting would be having the character Courtney's father break out of the jail and come after Courtney, or having C.J.'s father kick them both out. These are just suggestions, and if you have this all figured out, then you go right ahead with it. Honestly, I would like to read this book! And 6'6" is a little too tall, don't ya think? I've never met one person over 6'3". Sure, there may be people out there that are this tall, but, if I were you, I would lower it a couple inches. Either way, I'd say that 185 is a good weight for the 6 foot range. Just make sure it's because of muscle!